01/25/2023

💎Student's Name: Sujeong Yeom
💎Date: 01/25/2023
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📝 TODAY'S LESSON:
Course: English Test Course
Book: IELTS
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🛠️ SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION

✖You said: I think young people prefer to celebrate their special day with friends to family because they can share their taste with friends easily and casually more than doing their family. And also there are more great way to enjoy time with friends, like booking party room and prepare food and watching movie or using karaoke with friends, so they can have more fun than spending special day with family. So, I think young people prefer friends to family for celebrating.
✔Better say: I believe that young people prefer celebrating special days with their friends rather than their family because they share similar interests. There are numerous enjoyable ways to spend time with friends, such as booking private spaces, preparing food, watching movies, or having karaoke, which allows them to have more fun than with their family. This is why I think young people prefer spending time with friends.

✖You said: Most of the stock price was peak.  
✔Better say: Most of the stock prices were at their peak.
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🔴 Homework:
Please take note of what you learned in this lesson and apply it in your future conversations.
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📝 NEXT LESSON:
Course: Article English
Title: Grilling meat on apartment balcony: right or public nuisance?
Link: https://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20240123000679

[Pressure points] Grilling meat on apartment balcony: right or public nuisance?