01/24/2023

💎Student's Name: Sujeong Yeom
💎Date: 01/24/2023
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📝 TODAY'S LESSON:
Course: English Test Course
Book: IELTS
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🛠️ SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION

✖You said: I have read English document. It takes long time. But for train myself, I think it was nice.
✔Better say: I read an English document. It took a long time, but I think it was a good way to train myself.

✖You said: It was official document.
✔Better say: It was an official document.

✖You said: When you go to the same place, you can see different shops there so sometimes, I feel sad that there is a shop I like is no more there.
✔Better say: (This city is changing so much that) When you go back to the same place, you may see different shops. I feel sad that a shop I like is no longer there.

✖You said:  It's dynamic. It can be pros at same times cons.
✔Better say: It’s dynamic, which is its advantage and disadvantage at the same time.

✖You said: This special event that I attended was women developer event held by BBC.
✔Better say: This special event that I attended was a women developers’ event held by the BBC.

✖You said: In the event, there are many women developers from all over the UK. And also there were my friend who invite me to that event. And also, I could see the staff members of BBC who wants to introduce us about their job and company.
✔Better say: At the event, there were many women developers from all over the UK. My friend who invited me to the event was also present. I also met the staff members of BBC who wanted to introduce us to their jobs and company.
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🔴 Homework:
Please take note of what you learned in this lesson and apply it in your future conversations.
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Course: English Test Course
Book: IELTS