01/22/2023

💎Student's Name: Sujeong Yeom
💎Date: 01/22/2023
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📝 TODAY'S LESSON:
Course: Article English
Title: Behind the rise of unstaffed stores in Korea
Link: https://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20240119000691
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🔍 VOCABULARY WORDS

📌Patron (noun): A person who supports, sponsors, or contributes to an individual, group, cause, or establishment, often by providing financial assistance or encouragement.

Example sentence: The local artist was grateful for the generous patron who funded her upcoming exhibition, enabling her to showcase her work to a broader audience.

📌Unstaffed (adjective): Not having personnel or employees present

Example sentence: The convenience store was unstaffed during the late hours, relying on automated systems for transactions and security.
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🛠️ SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION

✖You said: There is a people who are in charge of registration for the course. My team in charge of running the course itself when it happen.
✔Better say: There are people who are in charge of registration for the course. My team is in charge of running the course itself when it happens.

✖You said: The more I get trained, the more I am learning that it is very different from what you know and make other people know.
✔Better say: The more I get trained, the more I learn that what you know is very different from what you need to make other people learn/know.

✖You said: Unstaffed shops are increasing in Korea, especially young people start their business with this type of shop. And also convenient store run their store in the night time without staff members.
✔Better say: Unstaffed shops are increasing in Korea, especially among young people who are starting their businesses with this shop model. Convenience stores have also started operating during the night without staff members.
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🔴 Homework:
Please take note of what you learned in this lesson and apply it in your future conversations.
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