10/24/2023

💎Student's Name: Sujeong Yeom
💎Date: 10/24/2023
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📝 TODAY'S LESSON:
Course: Debate English
Book: Express Yourself 1
Title/Page: Points to Ponder 4-6 (page 74-75)
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🛠️ SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION

✖You said: You can choose the design or structure of house after seeing the examples. We can see many examples but in terms of relationship with many family members, we see more problems than good case.
✔Better say: You can choose the design or structure of your house after seeing the models. We can see many models, but in terms of relationships with many family members, we see more problems than good cases.

Note: The word "examples" may not be the best word to use in this context. This is because examples are typically used to illustrate a concept or idea, rather than to describe different designs or structures of houses.

✖You said: Maybe people weigh more care about their asset or appearance than their real happiness by authentic relationship.
✔Better say: Maybe people care more about their assets and appearance than about their real happiness through authentic relationships. // Perhaps people place more importance on their assets and appearance than on their true happiness through genuine relationships.

✖You said: We couldn't heard of them.
✔Better say: We hadn't heard of them.

✖You said: He use his a lot of money.
✔Better say: He uses a lot of his money.
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🔴 Homework:
Please take note of what you learned in this lesson and apply it in your future conversations.
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📝 NEXT LESSON:
Course: Debate English
Book: Express Yourself 1
Title/Page: Points to Ponder 7 (page 75)